In the class, George gave me some suggestions on what could be modified. In the beginning, the sky changed from light to dark, after I modified it, the picture was improved a lot and the storytelling was better. After I made the modifications, the picture was improved a lot and the storytelling was better. And later on, there were some problems with the movement of the characters, after I made the modifications by combining George’s guidance and recording reference videos, I felt that the movement of the characters was more natural, which improved the whole animation and the movement of the characters very much.
I combined the movements in the third scene with the scene and finished all the camera work.